Saturday 29 December 2012

NARUTO 616 PREDICTION: Met Elders

Outside Konoha, 20 jonins are dead. We see snakes retreating, implying Oro killed them.

Sasuke: ... Let's get this over with.

Suigetsu: We'll wait with you Sasuke, I don't want to be around this pedo-snake!
Jugo: ...

Orochimaru: We're here, Sasuke-kun. Are you sure you want to go in?
Sasuke activates EMS and looks up The elders are coming this way... (memories from Itachi's flashback flood his own memories)

Sasuke's expression becomes angry and he closes his eyes. Opens eyes with EMS.

Sasuke: I'm going to say this once, come out of the bushes.

The elders walk out and seem unphased to see Sasuke

Granny elder: Orochimaru! You're supposed to be dead. How dare you return here?
Grandpa elder: Sasuke-kun... look at how far you've fallen. (shakes head) Itachi really did die for nothing.

Orochimaru steps forward but Sasuke commands him to stay back. He tells Jugo and Suigetsu to keep an eye on them and go retrieve what they're after.

Suigetsu: But I don't wanna go with this guy!
Jugo: Let's go, Suigetsu.
Orochimaru: I'm hurt you don't trust me more, but in time you will see the truths of this world, Sasuke-kun.. He licks his lips in that creepy way of his.

From the bushes we see Konohomaru and his twerpy little buddies hiding. He's shaking when he sees Orochimaru's eye.

Sasuke activates Tsukuyomi and traps the elders in genjutsu. and pierces the grandma elder. Itachi's voice is heard talking about sacrifice and the village. Sasuke shows them Itachi's painful memories and the elders seem shocked at what Danzo did.

Grandpa Elder: Sasuke that's enough! Can you really not understand your brother's feelings?

The images continue to flash by and suddenly the elders are in Tsukuyomi-land being repeatedly tortured and questioned about the village.

The grandpa elder comes to and has a bloody kunai in his hand. Sasuke made him kill the old woman. He demands answers from the old man and tells him he can make him talk with Edo Tensei if he wishes.

Orochimaru finds the remains of the Naka shrine and enters, alone, to retrieve the tablet. After they talk about the tablet, Suigetsu and Jugo are bound by Orochimaru snakes.

Orochimaru returns to Sasuke with them bound

Suigetsu: Sasuke make this creep let us go
Jugo: .... (He struggles but cant get free)

The grandpa elder is on the ground, clearly his brain has been fried by genjutsu and he has a twisted expression on his face.

Sasuke: I trapped him in a genjutsu where Itachi is torturing him. He'll wake up soon.
Orochimaru: <thinking to himself> I'll need to wait... he's become far stronger than I anticipated

Sasuke: Do it now, Orochimaru.

Orochimaru snaps the grandpa elders neck as Konohomaru stands from the bushes. Orochimaru performs the seals for Edo Tensei and reanimates the elders. Jugo and Suigetsu are both sacrificed.

Konohomaru: Stop right there! Rasengan!

Sasuke is hit but turns into a clone log. He flips around in the air and with chidori nagashi takes Konohomaru out in one hit, turning his blade to the blunt end while back-flipping into the air. He's laying on the ground bleeding and unconscious. The Edo Elders round up his friends, who are knocked out and overcome easily Moegi and Udon (yes, I looked up the name lol).

Orochimaru: Oh, touching. You're sparing their little lives.
Sasuke: They're more useful as hostages... Naruto likes this kid if he taught him Rasengan. That's useful. Did you get it?

Orochimaru motions a snake to puke out the tablet, which Sasuke immediately opens and begins scanning with EMS. Sasuke reads the tablet and doesn't comment on it. This is bad. Clearly it's been modified here at the end by someone. I was meant to read this.... Madara... you bastardThen he looks up and asks the Elders

Sasuke: Why were the Uchiha planning the coup? Who planned the massacre? What really happened after Madara lost at the valley of the end? Tell me everything!

We see side panels indicating the Uchiha ancestor leaving the Sage's bedside. Years of warfare, Madara and his brother training again. Hashirama found Konoha. The Uchiha exiling Madara for his extremism. We see Madara with an angry expression standing over his brother's deathbed. Uchiha clan ancestor glaring at his brother. Madara watching Hashirama being inaugurated, clearly buttmad. Madara writing the tablet, Madara's exile and his visit to Izuna's grave. Later his death at valley of the end. Hashirama sealing the 9 tails in Uzumaki ancestors. The attack. Uchiha being forced into the corner of the village. Sasuke's father and a young Itachi, the father is arguing with the elders about rights. The elders don't listen. The massacre. Itachi leaving, threatening the Third. The elders saying that Itachi is a true hero.

Sasuke seems very angry by the end of it. Orochimaru looks pleased. Suigetsu's sword is nearby, eerily reminding us of the price Sasuke paid for answers.

<Flash to Karin>

In the hastily constructed emergency shelter, she sits along with crying women and children. The guards warn them to not go outside because its just too dangerous. The kids continue crying.

Karin: Sasuke-kun... he's so confused. Suigetsu and Jugo's chakra vanished all at once. And that other chakra is... Orochimaru?!

She escapes undetected and follows Sasuke and Orochimaru into the woods. Edo Elders are carrying the brats. Konohomaru is unharmed.

Sasuke: Let's go, we're going to deal with this Uchiha Madara directly.
Orochimaru: <he's walking in back, smiling the "keikaku douri" smile>

Naruto Chapter 616 prediction: The Door and Key

*Naruto's pure kyuubi mode rages on again. It forms into the shape of Kurama, but seems to be a lot taller than before, however, still the same. hinata rides all the way up, still holding onto Naruto's hand with a smile. Her hair is sent into a tantrum of sways by the movement of the winds power. Suddenly, they stop at a good distance up from the alliance, such as the juubi was presented*

Hinata: "This chakra....it feels wonderful"
Naruto: *letting go of hinata's hand* "Hinata, you stay still here. I wouldn't want you to get involved with the bloodbath I have in store for those two. Kurama!"
Kurama: "I'm already on it!"

*Hinata looks down to see some of kurama's chakra forming into a sort of golden chakra-like thread. It begins to stitch up some of Hinata's bigger wounds, since her smaller wounds were healed from the first blast surged upon her from the kyuubi's chakra, along with the smudges on her face disappearing as well. The thread managed to fix some of her wounds almost instantly*

Naruto: *smiling towards her* "Until Kurama makes you fully better with the more delicate wounds, I'll take care of the enemy, and-

*Naruto stops at the sight of Hinata grabbing his left wrist with an intense glare*

Naruto: *smile fades, but comes back again in understanding of the gesture* "Kurama, what do you think? Is she well enough to fight?"
Kurama: *with a grin* "It can't be helped. Your girlfriend seems to have already convinced you."
Naruto: *blushing shyly and nervously* "Why did you have to go ahead and say it like that?"
Hinata: *giggling* "Oh Naruto-Kun"
Naruto: *In his thoughts as he looks at Hinata smiling* "It's a shame I didn't notice that laugh before...it's beautiful."

*As Naruto and Hinata stop and stare off into the current predicament with Kurama's chakra at full power, the alliance stare at Kurama's spectacular form in awe*

Shikamaru: *amused* "Impressive Naruto..."

*Shikamaru looks over to Neji's corpse, and appears to be saddened. Suddenly Lee, TenTen, and Kiba/Akamaru appear before Neji, along with Gai and Hiashi Hyuga*

Lee: *teary eyed* "Neji...I can't believe-"
TenTen: *getting panel time with tears in her eyes as well* "It can't be true.."
Hiashi: *anger on his face*
Gai: "......Neji"

*Shikamaru looks down from the scene in what looks like hurt*

Shikamaru: "I know the pain they feel....I can sense now what we all are beginning to share...."

*Shikamaru looks around, at the many deaths on the battlefield. He begins to clutch his chest in pain*

Shikamaru: "Naruto, you and Hinata are the key, and my father's strategy is the door....we will all walk into this door together right into a unified future....but it all depends on you..."

*Shows a panel of Naruto standing epically atop the kyuubi with Hinata*

Shikamaru's voice along with ^that Naruto epic panel: "You will lead us into the doors of peace!!"

*Obito stares from afar, frustratedly towards Naruto/Hinata/Kyuubi*

Madara: *amused* "Interesting....your words didn't seem to affect him at all.....what do you suppose we do now?"
Obito: *turns away from Madara's line of vision, and looks over to Kakashi*
Kakashi: *angrily staring at Obito to begin with*

*Sakura turns to see her sensei's actions*

Sakura: "Kakashi Sensei...are you-"
Kakashi: "Sakura, I need you to do me a small favor."
Sakura: "...."
Kakashi: "Can you tell Shikamaru to postpone Shikaku's strategy till I get back. I know he'll think less of me for it, but just make sure he does so."
Sakura: *wide-eyed* "What do you mean till you get back? Where are you-
Kakashi: *stares at Sakura and smiles behind his mask* "Trust me on this one."

*Sakura stares him down, but then nods at the odd request. Suddenly Kakashi uses Kamui to go into the other dimension. This surprises Sakura, but she remembers her Sensei's words, and begins towards Shikamaru*

Madara: *looks to Obito intently, knowing his next move* "Don't give in to soft words Obito. Remember where personal feelings led you before in the past."

*Obito begins to go into the other dimension with kamui*

Obito: *to Madara before disappearing* "I thought you would know me by now...butt out"
Madara: *grins*

*Obito disappears, leaving Madara alone to control the Juubi. Surprisingly, Madara has enough power to control it on his own*

Madara: "That Obito is starting to be a hindrance. I don't even need him to control the juubi, my power is sufficent." *looks towards Naruto* "All I need is to have my body, and I will end this ridiculous farce."

*Naruto and Hinata catch his line of vision*

Madara: "But in the mean time....let's see what the Juubi can really accomplish."

*Scene changes to Obito appearing before Kakashi in the other dimension. They stare at each other intently once more*

Obito: "It seems like we've hit the crossroads Kakashi"
Kakashi: *runs towards Obito in an unreal speed and punches him square in the face*

*Obito finally stops skidding along the nothingness that is the other dimension, and stands up. He wipes his bloody lips, and starts to wipe his eye."

Kakashi: "It's too bad you don't have your goggles this time around, maybe some of that dust wouldn't have got into your eyes."
Obito: *annoyed, but collects himself as he stands up straight* "What is it that you want Kakashi"

*Kakashi raises his fist towards his heart, and plainly sticks his thumb out to point at it. His eyes filled with rage*

Kakashi: "I came to confirm if my hero is really gone from this world, and..."
Obito: "...."
Kakashi: "...If my dreams died along with him!!"

BOLD WORDS AT THE END OF CHAPTER: "The final confrontation of two crossing paths!!"

Friday 28 December 2012

Naruto 616: A crippling blow

Naruto and hinata are holding hands when suddenly Hinata finds herself standing next to naruto in front of the kyubi. Hinata is terrified at first but then she

Naruto: "Its ok I have brought you into the mind link here with me and the kyubi. We need to make a plan to take down the juubi cause its obvious now we can't beat it with power so only strategy will allow us a victory."
Kyubi: "I do not have enough chakra yet to do a major attack so what ever we use must be without usage of a bijuu ball."
Hachibi: "If you need a bijuu ball you can leave that to us."
Naruto: "Are you two ok after that last attack?"
Bee: "It hurt but we got the job done. Yeah."
Naruto: "Well the reason I have brought hinata in here is I have a new strategy we can use, we deprive the juubi and obito of the chakra they need to carry out their plans."
Kyubi: "But you have seen what the juubi has done thus far. We can not afford to have another one of those attacks take place."
Naruto: "We are gonna need to use the full power of the byakugan to carry this plan out maybe even take it beyond that."
Hachibi: "If that is the case allow me to get us some additional assistance."

Suddenly several members of the hyuga clan all appeared at once.

Hyashi: "What is this place?"
Naruto: "You are inside the mind link with hinata, the hachibi, the kyubi, and myself."
Hyashi: "The hachibi said you had something to tell us. What is it?"
Naruto: "Im gonna need all of you for this but if it works we are about to deal a massive blow to the juubi."

Suddenly all of hyuga clan members gathered together with naruto and hinata. The hachibi moved in behind them.

Kakashi thinking: "Something must have just happened between them."
Naruto: "Everyone ready? NOW!"

All of them suddenly grab hands and instantly kyubi and hachibi chakra flows through all of them. Naruto summons several hundred shadow clones that charge towards the juubi.

Madara: "He really doesn't learn does he?"

Madara fires several fire blasts destroying clones when suddenly one of the clones transforms into a hyashi who immediately jumps up and hits the leg of the juubi with a massively over powered gentle fist attack that immediately staggers the juubi. The juubi lets a scream of rage and pain as the attacks from several hyuga members hit its body in multiple places. Madara repeatedly attacks at the clones with fire blasts but despite his efforts he can't seem to hit a single hyuga clan member or naruto.

Obito: "Damn it! These attacks are starting to make it harder to control the juubi. What ever they are doing we have to stop them right now."
Madara: "That's what Im trying to do."

Madara summons several wood clones that start fighting the clones. Suddenly a huge bijuu ball slams into the juubi from behind catching obito and madara by surprise.

Obito: "Damn it where did that come from?"

Madara turns around to see the hachibi behind them obviously exhausted. Obito turns around when suddenly he sees something in the corner of his eye and turn faceing forward to see naruto and hinata standing in front of him. Obito tries to strike naruto when suddenly hinata appears in front of him revealing the hinata next to naruto to be a shadow clone.

Hinata: "This is for NEJI!"

Hinata hits several dozen extremely fast gentle fist attacks into obito who screams in agony spitting out blood as hinata's strikes hit his whole upper torso. Obito staggers backward causing madara to turn around in surprise as he sees obito fall off the juubi and land on the ground.

Madara: "I see what you have done there. Clever but with obito who is gonna control the juubi."

Naruto tries to attack madara with a rasenshuriken but he flees off the juubi landing on the ground amongst his clones.

The juubi lets out a scream as it roars in anger and pain.

Kyubi: "Naruto I think we have just succeeded in taking control of the juubi out of the hands of obito but I think we just made the juubi very very angry."

The juubi lets out a massively loud roar as it causes tremors around the whole area.

617: Cries of rage...The juubi is unleashed.

Naruto 616 : REUNION!!!

NARUTO : Lets get this show on the road, Hinata!!
HINATA : !! [It makes me feel....safe...!!] Okay...!!
(Naruto holds Hinata's hands tightly)
SAKURA : Hinata....[She was always besides Naruto] (remembers)
[
Sai : (to Sakura) I think, Naruto loves you.
SAKURA : ?!!
]
KAKASHI : Sakura!! Don't get into the emotions now.
SAKURA : (looks at Kakashi and then down with a sad face).......(then feels happy for Naruto)
(Naruto goes in Kyuubi mode with nine chakra tails holding Hinata inside of it.)
HINATA : It feels like...
NARUTO : Lee!!
(Lee lands near Naruto)
NARUTO : Take Neji out of here and tell Kakashi Sensei to evacuate the corpses from the field.
LEE : [Neji....]?!!....(looks at Neji and feels sad and then holds him and moves back)
LEE : Kakashi Sensei. Naruto told to move away the corpses from the field.
KAKASHI : !! ...I can understand how must be he feeling right now. Okay. Kitsuchi.
NARUTO : Hold on, Hinata!!
(runs forward and scratches on juubi's body with its claws.)
(But the juubi's tails hold the arm and throws him on the alliance)
ALLIANCE : ?!!
(Naruto manages to stand among the alliance without hurting them)
NARUTO : Uncle Bee!! Are you alright?
BEE : Yo!! Kiddo!!
NARUTO : Then lets nail those bastards.
MADARA : Are they serious, Obito?
OBITO : (Ignores him) You still don't understand, Naruto!! I'll just have to make you feel the true despair by killing that girl standing beside you.
HINATA : ?!!
NARUTO : As if I let you, You moron!!
(Naruto and Bee dashes towards the Juubi)
(But they are thrown back because of the punches from the Juubi's tails)
NARUTO : Damn those tails or hands whatever. They're not letting us to reach near the Juubi.
KITSUCHI : Kakashi, why is he wasting the chakra on the dead. We can use it to fight the Juubi.
KAKASHI : I don't know. But he can't stand himself while fighting on their lying corpses.
(Kitsuchi moves away the corpses with the help of other earth style users)
KAKASHI : Shikamaru!!
(Shikamaru turns to Kakashi)
KAKASHI : Are you thinking about what I have found now?
SHIKAMARU : Yeah!! But we have to be careful.
KAKASHI : Yes. (looks at Hinata and Naruto) but we can't distract him now in the middle of the battle.
SHIKAMARU : Don't worry. We have our cards to play. Ino!! Choji!!
INO/CHOJI : !! (stands near Shikamaru)
KAKASHI : Choji!! guard Shikamaru and Ino.
CHOJI : Okay!!
SHIKAMARU : Ino, can you connect me to Naruto without your mind transfer.
INO : (remembers)
[
(Ino coming from a mission)
INO : (looks at her dad coming from the other way) Good evening dad!!
INOICHI : Good evening, Ino. How was your mission?
INO : (thumbs up) Mission Successful!! Today's mission was totally depended on my mind transfer jutsu. Thanks to my training.
INOICHI : Ino, you are progressing in your Mind Transfer Jutsu very well.
INO : Thank you, Dad. One day I'll perfect it.
INOICHI : But, Ino...
INO : What?
INOICHI : You can't rely on it when you are in a war, at least when your comrades are not around you to hold your body.
INO : But we will not be facing a war.
INOICHI : (laughs) No one can say that. We must always be prepared for... whenever time comes. War never gives a second chance. I'll teach you a jutsu. But you must be exhausted now. We will do the training tomorrow
INO : Okay dad.
(Next Morning)
INO : Dad, Which jutsu will you teach me today?
INOICHI : The first main objective of the War is to damage the enemy's mind. And as you know, our clan is specialist in mind related jutsu-
INO : But how are we going to attack those many enemies' minds. That'll be difficult. What if our body comes in their custody?
INOICHI : That's the main point of our jutsus. I'll attack you with one of it.
INO : ?!!
INOICHI : Be ready!!(makes a handseal)
INO : I'll just use my Mind Trans- (falls on the ground)
INOICHI : Hey, Ino. Are you alright
(Ino sits holding her head)
INO : That felt too much stress on my mind. Damn it.
INOICHI : I'm sorry child.
INO : But how did you do that? So quickly. I want to learn that jutsu.
INOICHI : (laughs) Yeah sure. But not today. I'll help you out. This jutsu is similar to Mind transfer but the speed of shifting from one body to another is within a blink of an eye and readily back to our own body. This even reduces down the probability of falling unconscious. And within that period of fraction of seconds you must disturb the mentality of your enemy. Got it!!
INO : You mean to say you transferred in my mind and disturbed my mentality in that moment. I want to learn it too.
INOICHI : We can use it either way round to communicate with you comrades but partially splitting our mind. That's what I and our clan members do during the war. Giving orders to our fellow comrades on the battlefield.
]
SHIKAMARU : Ino, Ino!! Can you?
INO : I'll try my best.[Thank You, Dad.]
SHIKAMARU : That's good.
INO : (sits down) Mind Exploring Jutsu!! Shikamaru sit nearby. I'll connect you to Naruto.
(Ino puts her hand on Shikamaru)
INO : Alright!!
[
SHIKAMARU : Hey, Naruto!!
NARUTO : ?!! How are you?
SHIKAMARU : Listen up. You can see that Juubi's is not allowing you to reach near him.
NARUTO : Yeah.
SHIKAMARU : That's because of Hachibi's Bijuudama that he used it on the Juubi's Bijuudama to blast it inside of the Juubi.
NARUTO : Yeah. That was a cool plan.
SHIKAMARU : As knuckle headed as always. Listen Naruto. The Juubi's body is not yet recovered from the blast. It seems that the inner skin of the Juubi is weak compared to its outer skin. We must attack him from the inside.
NARUTO : (looks at Juubi's hanging stomach out of its shape) ?!! But we can't even reach near him. And you're telling me to attack from the inside. The tails are stopping us.
SHIKAMARU : That's a tricky one. I think the alliance can try to hold of some of the tails. You can try your luck at that moment.
NARUTO : But that's impossi-
]
INO : (Blood drips from her nose) ....Sorry..... Shikamaru.
SHIKAMARU : Doesn't matters Ino. I told him the most of the part. Thanks to you and Sakura.
INO : Thank You Sakura.
(Sakura is shown healing her and helping her to regain her chakra back)
Sakura : Your nose is bleeding. Don't worry.
KAKASHI : Shikamaru. Did you explained him.
SHIKAMARU : Yeah. But (looks at Naruto)
NARUTO : Damn it.
HINATA : [I'm still useless.] (looks sad)
NARUTO : (looking at her) Don't feel bad Hinata.
[
NARUTO : Kurama. You heard everything, right?
KURAMA : Yeah. I don't think the alliance will be able to hold the tails even for 5 seconds.
NARUTO : Can you do that?
KURAMA : Hmm...You're a devil Naruto. Okay, I'll do it.
NARUTO : Hehe (scratches his head).
KURAMA : switch over.
]
(Kurama takes the place and turns to the alliance)
HINATA : ?!! (feels the chakra in her)
KURAMA : (growls and runs towards the alliance with an angry look)
BEE : ?!! (shocks at Naruto running in opposite direction)
MADARA/OBITO : ?!!!
ALLIANCE : ?!! (gets a little scared)
SHIKAMARU : ?!! What is he doing?
KAKASHI : ?!! Naruto. Shikamaru!! contact him.
INO : I'm ready.
[
SHIKAMARU : Naruto?!!
KURAMA : Hey kid, Its me, Kyuubi. Tell everyone not to move from their place.
SHIKAMARU : But?!!
KURAMA : Do it!!
]
INO : ?!!
SHIKAMARU : ?!!
KAKASHI : What he said?
SHIKAMARU : He said not to move from the place.
KAKASHI : [Could it be?] Shikamaru. Do it!! Hurry up.(looks at Kyuubi)
SHIKAMARU : ?!!
(Some of the shinobis retrieves back to avoid the Kyuubi's attack)
ALLIANCE : He's gone mad!!
MADARA : ?!! Is the Kyuubi still not in full control of that boy?
OBITO : ?!! [That's!!] (remembers Kakashi's punch in the other dimension)
INO : (puts her hand on Shikamaru while Sakura heals Ino)
[
SHIKAMARU : Everyone!! Don't Panic. Stay where you are.
ALLIANCE : ?!!
(murmurs)
ALLIANCE : What is he talking about?!! What?!! Why?!! How can we..?!!
SHIKAMARU : Naruto has a plan. I guess
ALLIANCE : ?!!
]
(Kurama runs over and slams his hands and tails on the alliance creating a chaos)
MADARA : He's reducing our pain.
OBITO : He's not.
MADARA : Hmm?
(Kurama slams the Ino-Shika-Cho group too)
HINATA : Naruto?!! What are you-
KURAMA/NARUTO : Hey girl, you're next!!
HINATA : ?!! [His voice. What happened to Naruto?]
[
NARUTO : Kurama!! You scared Hinata.
KURAMA : I just gave her the orders what she has to do.
NARUTO : What?!!
KURAMA : Now then..
]
(The whole field is covered with dust)
INO : .....
[
SHIKAMARU : Kyuubi!! Thanks for the power up.
KURAMA : Thank me later kid, put the plan in action.
SHIKAMARU : ?!! Yeah alright. Earth Style Users(ESU)!!
ESU : ?!!!
SHIKAMARU : Try to hold as much as Juubi's tails stationary and others help them to achieve it. Make the way for Naruto!!
ALLIANCE : Roger!!!
]
MADARA : What is he up to?
OBITO : ......[They won't be able to scratch our plan even if they recover]
(From the dust where Naruto/Kurama is standing, several shinobis leap out from it in the air)
(A confidence is shown in their eyes)
MADARA/OBITO : ?!!
(Juubi growling)
(The shinobis land ahead of the dust area and runs towards Juubi)
MADARA : Little flies dare to buzz around
(The shinobis stops in a hurry in front of the Juubi and makes the handseals)
ESU : Earth Style : Devil's Arm!!!
(A bunch Huge arms rises from the ground from the center and grabs the tails of the Juubi)
ESU : Use your full strength!!
(The arms holds the tails and separates on either sides giving an opening to attack the Juubi's body)
OBITO : Damn you!!(Holds a seal)
KURAMA/NARUTO : Now's my chance.
HINATA : ?!!
(Kurama runs towards Juubi for the attack)
(Two-Three Juubi's tails frees itself from the arm's grip and tries to block the attacking Kurama)
(Some of the Water style users attack)
WSU : Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu!!
(The dragons attacks the blocking tails and tries to separate them.)
(Shinobis rains explosive Kunais at the blocking tails creating a huge cloud of smoke along with steam formation)
KURAMA : Hey girl, hold yourself.
HINATA : Okay!!
[
KURAMA : Naruto!! You rest and build up your chakra for now.
NARUTO : Huh?!! What do you mean?
KURAMA : You'll know it soon. Hachibi!! Are you ready?
GYUUKI : Whenever you are!!
]
(Kurama dashes towards Juubi)
HINATA : ?!!
INO-SHIKA-CHO : ?!!
KAKASHI/SAKURA : ?!!
ALLIANCE : ?!!
(Everyone with a stunned face, What are the chances for the hit? Will they succeed in their plan?)
(Kurama runs through the smoke with full speed to attack the Juubi)
(As he passes through the smoke, on the other side, sharp claws emerges out with an orange colored fur on whole hand)
(As the chakra covered body passes through the smoke, on the other side, the face of the devilish Kyuubi with sharp canines emerges out)
(As the whole chakra tails pass through the smoke, on the other side, the bunch of tails emerges out and then spreads out)
(The Kyuubi enters the battlefield with a roar)
(Kurama runs at the Juubi violently)
MADARA : My pet is out to bark.
OBITO : ......
(Hinata is shown near Kyuubi's ear holding his fur and using the chakra at her feet to stand)
(Kurama reaches near Juubi's stomach and attacks with his claws on his stomach to tear apart.)
(But the claws don't go much deeper)
(Juubi, in pain, attempts to attack with his only hand to stop the Kyuubi's claws but Kurama blocks it with his tails and attempts several more attacks to worsen Juubi's wounds)
(Hinata runs back from Kyuubi's head to tail and jumps off from there)
(At the same moment, Kurama jumps high in the air looking in Madara's eyes directly with anger)
(At the same moment, Hachibi comes into the picture from behind with a huge Bijuudama)
(Hinata lands on Hachibi's head)
(Several Hyuugas along with Hiashi jumps on Hachibi from back and runs along the way towards his head)
HIASHI : Hinata!! Are you alright!!
HYUUGAS : Lady Hinata!!
HINATA : (looking at Hiashi) Yes!!
HIASHI : Ready!! Bee!!
HACHIBI : Here we go, Take this one!!! Motha....f**ka!!
(Launches the Bijuudama straight onto Juubi's stomach but is about to rebound back)
HIASHI : (stretches both the arms) Air Barrier Palm!!!
HINATA : Air Palm!!!
HYUUGAS : Air Palm!!
(Hyuugas standing on Hachibis head with Hiashi at the center, pushes the Bijuudama with all might through Juubi's stomach)
(Juubi screams in pain as the Bijuudama is pushed inside)
(One of the tails attack the Hyuugas)
HYUUGAS : (still holding their attacks) ?!! Damn it!!
???? : Gatsuuga!!!
???? : Gatsuuga!!!
(Gatsuuga pushes out the tails away up to certain limit to prevent the attack)
(Kiba, Akamaru, his mom and her partner lands on the Hachibi's back)
KIBA : What did you thought? heheh. Keep going Hinata!!
HINATA : (assures) Yes!!
(The Bijuudama is pushed further and a big hole is created through in the Juubi's stomach with the flesh burning at the edges)
(Juubi screams while staggering at his place)
(Kurama, with a grin on his face, fires another Bijuudama on Madara and Obito while in the air)
OBITO : ?!!
MADARA : (looking at Kyuubi) What a reunion?!! (smirks)

(Madara stands smiling at the Kyuubi's attack!!!)
(What are his limits?)

Thursday 27 December 2012

Naruto 616

Hinata: my chakra... its returning... how?

Naruto: Kurama allows me to pass chakra to others by touching them

Hinata: (Naruto-kun I knew I felt safe in your hands)

Naruto talking to Bee via Tailed Beast Connection

Naruto: Bee-san I have my power back, now is the time execute the plan

Bee: right!!!

Naruto talking to the shinobi alliance

Naruto: Everyone its time to end it

Naruto has a smirk on his face

????: I hope not without us

Naruto turns to see all the Kage but not Tsunade

Naruto: Gaara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gaara: is that the Juubi

Naruto: yea

Bee: brotha your alive I knew it would take more than this motha ****a to take you out

A: Bee he is strong, too strong

Naruto: wheres Tsunade?

All the Kage have a look of sorrow on their faces, and A places a hand on Naruto

A: Naruto, she gave her life to save us... to give the world a better fighting chance

Naruto's eyes widen

Naruto: Tsunade-sama...

Obito: Naruto, how does it feel to lose but another comrade, face you cant win

Bee: Try out the true A and Bee combo, the true LARIOT

Bee and A are standing next to each other wearing the lightning style armor

Naruto 616 prediction

Naruto: let's go hinata

hinata: yes naruto kun!


The two go chargeing at obito holding hands still.

obito: *remebers rin* then allow me to show you despair in its fullest!

naruto: bring it on!

ten tails begins releaseing multiple wood spikes at anruto and hinata using sky plam hinata deflects most of them naruto then reaching his hand out creates a kyuubi arm grabbing the spikes he throws them back at obito madara uses shirna tensei knocking them away from the duo naruto then is seen with a rasenshuriken in hand throwing it hinata speeds it up with sky palm

madara: fast i'll have to absorb it.

madara absorbs the rasenshuriken but the force of the sky palm knocks him back slightly but he remains on his feet

madara: i see they intend to sue ninjutsu and taiutsu related moves in a combination i can't absorb taijutsu just like that tiger jutsu that guy used earlier.

obito: DIE YOU TRASH!

all ten tails come at naruto and hinata naruto creates nine tails and garbs onto them hinata blasts the tenth one away naruto throws her and himself up onto the tails and begin running at madara and obito from the tails the kyuubi head appears around the two as naruto forms a tailed beast ball releaseing along with hinata using sky palm it flies at them obito absorbs it with kamui and repels the skypalm with rinnegan at the same time. the hachibi then appears above the tentails releasing yet another tailed beast ball madara repels it right back at the eight tails and has the tentails release another ball at the allince. hinatas father stops it with a large scale rotation.

hinata father: don't underestimate the hyuuga! naruto finish madara leave teh battle field to us! the hyuuga have teh best defense!

naruto: right!

naruto rushs up to madara rasengan in hand hinata right next to him still holding hands naruto tries to ram a rasengan into madara but madara absorbs it hinata behind madara uses jyuuken blocking two chakra points.

madara: (they aim to take out my chakra points so the flow of chakra ends that won't heal easy even for an edo tensei body ) shirna tensei!

naruto creates his tails once more protecting the two as they are knocked back naruto creates a kyuubi arm grabing onto the ten tails tail and swings his way onto the ground, the tentails release a large roar it appears to be changeing shape.

madara: we can't allow them to get close twice another hit would be the end i see they had one more plan left the hyuugas jutsu is storng after all.

obito: then we'll just need to use the juubis final form they won't even be able to blink

next time the juubis final form

Naruto 616: Do You Promise?

Naruto: You see Obito I am nothing like you. I will beat you and bring true peace to this world.

Obito: Naruto you still choose to be a naive child. With the juubi I will bring true peace to this world.

Madara: You mean we Obito.

Obito: Huh? Oh yeah, we will bring peace to this world.

Madara: You're still going to stick to the plan aren't you? You know you give your life so I can live.

Obito: Don't worry I haven't forgot. I totally plan on going according to plan.

Madara: You promise?

Obito: What?

Madara: Do you promise?

Obito: (sigh). I promise. Alright?

Madara: Pinky Promise

Obito: What are we five?

Madara: I'm only saying this because Hashirama promised me I could be the leader of Konoha and look at where we are now.

Obito: Okay

(Obito thinking to himself): Like I'm ever going to do that.


Hinata: What do you think they're doing.

Naruto: I don't know but I wouldn't mind doing that with Sasuke.

Hinata: What!?

Naruto: Nothing

Naruto 616 : Hope Renewed

Obito : Naruto those pretty words of her are only ilusions
that blind you from the truth. you're friends will die. No matter what you say
Naruto : I...... was a fool because of the bonds we share
those bonds can never be destroyed. The moment i stop believing in my friends is
the moment i will become like you.
Hinato( that's right Naruto )
Obito : Still he doesn't change...
Obito( why doesn't he give up)
Madara ( i thought he was gonna break)

The Scene Switches

Sasuke : What was that immense explosion?
Orochimaru : I see tobi reached his goal
Sasuke : Goal?
Orochimaru : we have arrived
Sasuke : The Uchiha hideout.... why here
Orochimaru :Before i bring you to them you must read the contents
of the tablet once more.
Sasuke: I alreay read it once
Orochimaru : but not with you're new eyes
Sasuke : right.....
Sasuke reads the contents.
Sasuke :if i use that then i will get new eyes ones again............
........ wait there is another secret passage way underneath this?
Orochimaru : yes but you will need the new eyes
Sasuke : hmph i am strong enough as it is.
Orochimaru : Compared to those fighting the war you are....
insignificant... now. Unless you give me you''re body
Sasuke : how dare you.
Orochimaru : those shockwaves were from shinobi a lot more
powerful than Itachi so i advised you listen.
Sasuke looks outside and sees huge explosions.

Next Naruto 617 : Answers

Naruto 616 Prediction : A Hawks prey

Obito: ...*he's holding her hand...and she's holding his....I see.*
Obito: Naruto, if I were to kill that woman beside you, what would you do?
Hinata: !?
Naruto shows an angry face at him
Naruto: Come and try.
Obito: You don't know, do you? You would be so fueld with rage that you would lose control, and kill everything around you wouldn't you. Just like I did, when I saw the one I loved killed by my best friend.
Kakashi: *!? So...back then...you killed those mist shinobi...*
Naruto: IT WILL NEVER COME TO THAT! You won't lay a hand on her, or anyone else from here on out!
Obito: ...
Madara: He won't, but I will.
Madara claps his hands and a giant meteor comes from the sky
Obito: !? What do you think youre doing?
Madara: Excuse me? You just aimed the juubi's bijuudama point blank at them and you're complaining about this?
Obito: That's not it, I want to prove my point.
Madara: Ha, you really are a child.
Kakashi: It's too big for my Kamui!
The army starts running for it
Naruto starts creating a bijuudama
Naruto: Hinata, when I blow that rock up, can you push the remianing rocks away from everyone with your wind palm?
Hinata: With this much chakra, I guess I can..
Naruto: Alright!
Naruto fires his bijuudama, it destroys the meteor
Hinato jumps on Naruto's back and Naruto jumps into the air
Hinata uses her wind palm in hitting all the falling rocks away from the army
Kiba: Wow, hinata sure packs a punch with Naruto's chakra.
Sakura: Amazing...Hinata and Naruto really work well together..... (flashback of Sasuke's face) I wonder how he's doing....
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Scene changes to the Kages
Raikage puts hit shirt on Tsunade upper half body
Onoki: She gave her life to save ours, as expected from the hokages, always sacrificing themselves for others.
Raikage: She even gave me my arm back...
Mei: What about you Katsuya, what will you do?
Katsuya: I will follow lady Tsunades will, and pass myself to her successor.
Gaara: The last of the legendary three has died.
Orochimaru: Oh I don't know about that.
Kages: !??
Orochimaru stands high on a tree left my Madara
Mizukage: That's...
Gaara: Impossible...Orochimaru?
Onoki: I thought that punk Sasuke kid killed him?
Sasuke walks up beside Orochimaru
Raikage: !? SASUKE!
Sasuke: What are the kages doing here.
Juugo: According to my birds, they were in combat with Uchiha Madara
Orochimaru: *I see...so our little Madara experiment became strong enough to defeat the 5 kages...how delightful.*
Sasuke: Where is Madara.
Juugo: He's north from this location, a couple miles.
Orochimaru: Sasuke, you wanted to kill Madara correct?
Sasuke: Yeah, why.
Orochimaru: Good...but can you pull it off?
Sasuke stares at him with the Eternal
Sasuke: Are you questioning my power.
Orochimaru: No, I'm merely proposing a safer path in approaching this situation.
Sasuke: And that would be..
Orochimaru: If Madara was capable of all this, then so should you, that is if you want to defeat him. So why not test your power...
Orochimaru looks at the kages
OrochimaruL Against them!
Gaara: Sasuke! Madara is our enemy as well. He's too powerful. If you engage us here, you won't gain anything.
Onoki: He's right boy. There is a war going on, this is a fight for another time.
Sasuke: What's that smell?
Onoki: !?
Sasuke: Oh...it's fear.
Raikage: Damn you! You little shit come at me!
Raikage powers up
Mei: Raikage-sama don't! Look at his eyes. They're different from before. Remember what happened in your last fight with him.
Raikage: You dare mock me woman! He's still a threat to the shinobi alliance! If anything he's still working with that masked man! Our duty is to stop that. On top of that, he's got Orochimaru with him. It's out duty to stop him.
Onoki: ...he makes a point.
Gaara/Mei: !?
Onoki: Naruto and the others are dealing with the other Madara and perhaps the real Madara now. We can't give them more weight to deal with. We do our part here.
Mei: ...
Gaara: Agreed.
Orochimaru: Then it's settled. After this...we will go to our original location.
Sasuke: Fine. This should only take a few minutes.
Sasuke jumps towards them with his hand on his sword
Chapter end.

Tuesday 25 December 2012

Naruto manga 617: The arrival of kages

As the red aura of midnight tiger hits the Madara, Madara fall of from juubi. Of course the wood attachment connected to juubi also broke.

Gai :My attack worked ( panting)

Kakkashi :Gai! are you ok?

Kakkashi jump of from Obito's place and move to Gai.

Kakkkashi :come on you need to see medical teams... Gai?

Gai : ( Still struggling for breath and blood is coming out of his body and evaporates in to air ) Kaakshi it is enough .I don't have enough chakra...I am going to die....I am going to see my Neji

Madara : ( in mind) Damn it! What was that actually ? I am sure I can absorb chakra but?

Obito : ( in mind) This is good for me.Madara's wood attachment is broke.Now I am the boss of juubi.

Kakkashi moves Gai to a safe place.So that Lee Ten ten and Naruto will have a last time with Gai.

Lee & Tenten : Gai sensei?

Gai :Lee...This is my final technique....I hope you watched carefully and that is how you use tat technique....Tenten You loved Tsunade sama ...train more and more and Naruto kun you will become a good hokage tomorrow and finally mt eternal rival kakkshi.....

Kakkshi : ( tears come out from his eyes) Gai you should not talk ...

Gai : I think this time I win ....

Kakkashi : yaa

Gai closes his eyes

Lee : Gai sensei!!!!!

Madara quickly jump from ground to juubi.

Obito : ( to Madara ) That attack was nothing much more than an aura attack. It is not chakra....Now I am the one who control the juubi and you will obey.

Madara : I am alright with that ...be careful that you don't get loose from that position ( In mind )he is becoming tough to deal with. But I have to wait for a careless movement from him At that time I will show you who is real boss.

Shikamaru :At least one is separated form juubi.Good work.

Ino : But we lost our gai sensei


Hiyasashi : War is alwayas like this ! ( activate byakugan ) what is this

Shaikamaru : What did you sense some thing?

Hiyasashi : four strong chakras coming this place and they are very close . I can't see the face very well...........they are here!

four strong figures jump to battle field and everyone looks surprised

Shikamaru : They are kages

Naruto : I thought they ......

Madara : What the hell?!! I am sure I killed them. How come they are here?! ( In mind ) the last attack from taijutsu user it's really effecting my wood element... seems like I can't use mokuthon for a short time.

Obito : Fighting against four kages and controlling juuubi is difficult

Kakkashi : If they come just early .....


End

Next time Kages X Juubi

Naruto 616: The power of taijutsu

Madara and Obito looking at Might guy

Madara :what is that? It is really chakra? and his chakra level is seems as to 9 tails

Obito :This must be his gate techniques.He would have opened last gate.That's why his chakra seems so powerful

Madara : Opened the last gate.Then that person is already dead.

Madara smirks



Shikamaru : Guy sensai.....I know how you feel.But we need to stick with our plan

Sakura : Shikamaru don't stop him...

Might guy : Naruto... kakkashi... lend me your ear for a minute

Kakkashi : Do you have a strategy?

Guy talks with kakkashi and Naruto

Madara : This is stupid. attack!

10tails hand swung towards the location of kakkashi Naruto and Guy but they jump in to air and land safely but many other name less ninjas die.

On next moment Naruto makes three clones and threw smoke bomb on ground from that smoke screen Might guy and kakkashi jump towards Madara and obit o .

Obito : He attacks straight always

this time too ten tails hand attack kakashi and Guy and they take a hit. But they dissapear as shadow clones

Obito &Madara : What kagebunshin? When did they?

Naruto: ( In mind) when I threw smoke bombs on ground I made three clone and they changed their appearance to kakashi sensei and Thick brow sensei. Kakkashi sensei just used his kamui absorbed thickbrow sensi and teleported himself behind those bastards.

From behind Obito and Madara Kakkashi appears and land on juubi and teleport Guy and Guy makes some movements with his hand.kakkashi try to make Obito busy

Guy :MIDNIGHT TIGER!

A red aura of a Large tiger move towards Madara at top spped

Madara : With my ability I can absorb their jutsu

Red aura of tiger hits Madara and a sphere of aura created around Madara's body and Madara spins in it.

End. Next time arrival of kages

NARUTO 615 - Invincible Immortal

Naruto drops Neji.....With tears running down his face. And says under his breathe....That its not to late to stop all of this. Saying this still a chance for you to come back to the light.

Obito Goes insane and starts screaming out. I just killed you friend. Your family is dead because of me The world is in shambles. What about the hatred, the lost, the total despair. You dont have a hope of winning. Submit to

Naruto...Yes...You did end the lives of many shinobi, my friend, and my family. But....its alright because they are all still alive.

Hinata starts crying and obito is beweilderd.

Naruto: They live on in each and everyone of us. In our memories and in our heart. Neji will live on in our memories of his comrades friends and families. I realies that is what it means to truly be alive. To be acknowleged. Thats why we are not going to lose. To protect not only the shinobi world. But our legacy. Our memories. And our future. No matter how messed up it will be. Mistakes...losses, and hatred will always be there. But knowing how to live and move on to remember those why we have such hatred in our hearts and to have the courage to make sure no one else has to know that hatred is good enough for me. Neji, Jiraiya, Gramps, Mom and dad.....even Sasuke

Obito: STOP you can have all of it. Everyone will be alive. You will be hokage. Sasuke will be back. You wont know the difference. Everything will be perfect. There will be no need for hope or despair. Everything will be perfect.

Naruto: I wish all my dreams would come true. But people died for a reason. to make a better future. I cant forsake their lives...Then they will truly be dead. Plus. It wouldnt be real. I rather be loser in real life with my own hands then be hokage in some fake dream world.

Obito: Stop.....(Flash backs of rin)

Kakashi: Obito he is right....We can never bring Rin back. Even if she exist and live in that dream world. We could never predict how she would change or grow. At the end of the day it would just be lie

Obito: *Rages and breaks free from Juubi as madara is left alone to tame it while it goes beserk. He lunges at Naruto using Kamui going insane. sucking in everything around him like a vaccum. Shinobi get sucked it and ripped to shreads by it. Obito tries to kill Naruto But Kakashi uses kamui to negate it and tackle them as they are left in the dimension to their own means.

Kakashi: stands up doing hand signs as his sharingan turns off. and Raikiri starts crackeling.

Obito: Live, Die, JUST DISSAPEAR INTO THE DARKNESS YOU PEICE OF TRASH

Kakashi: .....You were once a hero of the leaf. Even know. Back then....You are stll a hero to me. But it times to finish this.

Kakakshi: Kakashi Raikiri glows white with his white chakra. The shear intensity of it blows away his mask

CLiffhanger: The chakra that cut lightning itself. Kakashi bears his white fang to cut through the darkness.

kitsuchi: damn... it won't last long!
mifune deeply wounded: everyone lets assemble! medic ninjas are requested! take the wounded at a long distance frome here! we need to prepare for the execution of the hd's plan!
every ninja moves according to the plan.
guy, rock lee and ten ten arrive at the place where lies the body of neji.
guy: neji...
lee: i... my rival...
and with tears in his eyes clench his fist.
ten ten hugs hinata, bent on neji's body.
even sai kakashi and sakura arrive.
every konoha rokie is now there.
suddenly a strong uproar is heard! we can see a big crack in the rock mountain that was holding the kyuubi.
the mountain falls apart!
madara is with his arms folded. at his side obito.
madara, with a smirk smile: and now?
obito's look is fixed on naruto's group.
naruto is staring at madara and obito.
madara: seems like your friend is becoming a little pissed off...
tobi, with a mad face: i want ... more despair!
tobi: seems like all your friends are gathered. now il will easyer to kill all of them naruto! and it will be in front of your eyes! but don't worry! very soon you will die too!
naruto: you bastard! i'll stop you here and now!
tobi: how pathetic!
kakashi: naruto, don't get provoked by him! we need to focus on shikaku's plan. it's the only hope we have. How much time you need more?
naruto: two minutes more...
guy: lee, ten ten, prepare yourself. we need to buy time.
naruto: no! i won't let you...
but guy interrupt naruto: naruto, shikaku, inoichi, neji and every ninja that is no long with us, choose to sacrifice his life in order to give an hope to all of us. we have to make this sacrifice was not in vain!
naruto:...
guy: and also... i want to kick their ass very badly!
guy kakashi lee ten ten hiashi chouza sai kiba shino hinata etc.. is lined up in front of the enemy.
naruto with ino choji and shikamaru is behind them.
guy: naruto don't let our hope fade by!

Naruto: Obito you bastard!
Hinata: Neji.....*cries*
Hiashi:He was a fine great Hyuga who had so much potential... its a shame
Lee:Neji!!
Tenten:*burst in tear* I.. I... always loved him
*Lee and Guy burst in to 7th gate and perform a combo Afternoon tiger destroy the spears and pushing the Juubi back*
Obito:silly fools dont they realize this terror will never
Madara*thinking*:This is a waste of time we need to Kyuubi and Gyuki immediately,now to slaughter the bugs
Madara:METEOR NO JUTSU!!!!
*everyone including the Juubi gazes up at the big ass space rock heading straight for them in fear,awe and shock*
Naruto*thinking*:I couldnt save him......Sasuke i coudlnt save either......everyone....is gonna die because of me............An era of peace.............what can I do........dammit sage mode is useless.......and kurama still needs time......
*The Meteor is only 1200 meters away from naruto and co*
Hinata:Naruto kun
Sakura OMG we are gonna die
Everyone else:screams
Madara:*smirks*
*Suddenly naruto is filled with energy and power*
Naruto:I WILL SAVE EVERYONE ELSE NO ONE WILL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ODAMA RASENSHURIKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hes throws a rasenshuriken the size of a city block at the meteor that then completely
destroys the meteor
Madara:WTF!
Obito:Juubi attack!!!!
Juubi:grrrr.....grrrrrr.ggrrrrr......get.....get.. ...GET OFF MY HEAD HUMANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Madara: Shit!
Obito: Fuck O_o
Juubi(in a demonic voice)-An Uchiha dares control me...I am a supreme being that created this world and now seek to destroy it.
JuubiANDEMONIUM SOULFUCK!!!
*the souls of everyone but Naruto and the villains gets eaten by Juubi*
Juubu(demonic voice):HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
Naruto:You monster
Juubi:ASSIMILATION!!!!!!!!!
*Naruto and Killer Bee are drawn into the Juubi then arent seen again*
Obito: OH MY RIKUDO!
Madara:Hmph
Juubi:FINALLY I AM COMPLETE I AM JUUBI AHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!
*The Juubi looks exactly like the silhouette,its black and 6000 meters tall*
Juubi: This world fell to the humans now they shall die HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Juubi:BIJUUDAMA!!
*The Juubi fires a bijuudama that nukes the earth country completely then fires 4 more destroying the water,wind and fire country leaving the lightning country remaining*
Madara:Looks like i got no choice
Madara:MUGEN MOKUTON BUNSHIN NO JUTSU
*1 billion clones are spawned*
Obito:This is perfect yes now all we have to do it fuse with it right right
*Madara stabs Obito*
Madara:i never wanted peace i wanted power from the get go
It ends with Madaras army approaching the juubi

Saturday 22 December 2012

Naruto 615 Prediction: Dealing with Revenge

Naruto face off Neji death !

Naruto is still schocked, as Neji is dying in front of Naruto, Hinata is crying a lot, while her body is shaking. Shinobi Alliance behind Naruto look with sadness, pity. In front of them on Juubi Madara and Obito are standing. Obito has pleased look while Madara has emotionless look.

Naruto(slowly move his look to see Neji face): Neji ?!
Hinata: Neji..., brother...
Neji(happy): Don't worry..., I don't blame... you, Naruto, Hinata, I just *cough !* *cough !*
Naruto(looks with fear while facing off Neji dying): ...
Neji: I couldn't be more happy than I am now *spit blood*, being your friend. You released me from curse...,*spit blood* and let me under....stand *cough* there is no destiny... we can change our future. *cough, cough*
Naruto: ?!
Obito: stop this nonsense, hurry up and die.
Neji(ignore Obito): so please change it for Hinata, Hyuuga and all shinobi..., *spit blood last time*
Naruto: Neji..., I ?!
Hinata: ?!
Neji(loose balance dying): please... be safe, farewell *closes his eyes, then his body fall on Naruto shoulder, as Neji lost his consciousness*
Obito(confident): Finally...

Meanwhile team 8 is shown. Gai looks at Neji barerly standing in front of Naruto while being pierced by roots spikes, he has shocked expression.
while Lee try to fool himself that Neji is right and he can't believe what he see ,same with TenTen.

Gai: Neji... No..., medic !!!, go and treat Neji fast !!
Sakura: it is too late...
Shizune: Sakura is right...
TenTen(schocked with widden eyes): Neji...
Kakashi(feel pity for Gai): Gai...
Lee: Neji, escape from here !,(turns to Sakura) Sakura
Sakura(shake her head): sorry lee
TenTen(sad): Lee..., Neji...

TenTen approaches Lee, then put her hand on Lee shoulder while crying

Lee(looks at TenTen): TenTen, Neji is...
TenTen: Lee...,you know...
Lee(turns to Gai): Gai sensei...
Gai(tears pour down on his cheeks): Lee, Neji is...
Lee(looks at Gai with sadness then turns to Neji, Naruto and Hinata): Neji, please move at least...
Gai(crying more and more intesively while clench fists): Lee..., you should understand it... already...
Lee(tears pour down on his cheeks): Gai Sensei, so *turns to Neji motionless fall on Naruto shoulder * It can't be..., Neji !
Gai(while crying ): *Neji, forgive me... I failed as your sensei...*

Gai clench fists in anger, then cross his arms at his chest height, Lee follows Gai.

Gai(raise his face then send serious glare to Obito): *Don't worry Neji..., I promise to take revenge for your death !* (looks in Juubi direction) You will pay me !
Lee(raise his face and has rage in his eyes): *Neji, my best friend, great rival I swear I will avenge you !*

Gai/Lee: Inner gates ?!
Shikamaru: Shadow Imitation no jutsu !
Ga: ?!
Lee: ?!
Shikamaru: Ekh.., just in time !
Kakashi: great work Shikamaru !

Kakashi, Chouza, Tsume, Shibi approach Gai from behind his back.

Kakashi: Gai, I know how you feel, but you should understood, enemy is too powerfull !
Gai(erupts in rage): Gah!.., I just can't stop my rage, gah!
Gai: Fourth gate of Pain opened !
Kakashi(pushed back by schockwave comming from Gai): ugh...Gai !, it is no use, if you attack straight at them you kill yourself and make fight harder for us, I will try to avange you, and then ?!
Shikamaru(fall on one knee): ugh ?! *I can't keep him anymore*
Gai: I am sorry Kakashi, but I will go !
Gai: Five gate of Limit opened !
Shikamaru: ?! argh!!! *Shadow mimitation was repeled*

Shikamaru shadow was repeled by shockwave comming from Gai releasing five gate then Shikamaru is pushed back but keep standing pose. Kakashi notice this, then walks before Gai, turns face to face with Gai, stretch his both hands blocking Gai's way to attack.

Kakashi(uncover his sharingan, serious): so if you are goona to attack them alone ,you will have to go through me first.
Gai(try to control rage): Kakashi..., go away...
Kakashi: No.., you are my friend and I don't let you charge straight at them, they are too powerfull..
Gai: Kakashi, don't force me to attack you..., my student just died in front of my eyes, I have to avenge him now !
Kakashi: Gai , I understand you well !, but if you charge now mindless, you will die without doing any damage to them...
Gai: I don't care..., forgive me ,Kakashi. I will go !
Kakashi: ?! *Damn ?!*

Gai is about to rush at Kakashi, who blocks his way, suddenly few arms are put on Gai shoulders, stopping him. Kakashi is suprised then see Chouza, Tsume on Gai's left side and Shibi, Hiashi Hyuuga on Gai's right side.

Chouza: Gai, you are not alone.
Gai(shocked, turns to his left): Chouza?!
Tsume: We are here to help you, and we tame this beast soon, hehe !
Gai(schocked): Tsume Inzuka too?!
Shibi: we will avenge your student death, but together !
Gai(schocked, turns to his right): Shibi Aburame ?!
Hiashi Hyuuga(tears are slowly fell on ground from his eyes): Neji, he was almost as son to me, my brother son exactly... I promise you, we will avenge him ! *clench his fists*
Gai(lower his head): Hiashi Hyuuga, even you ?! *hyuuga crying*
Gai(in anger): but I have to avenge Neji.., now is best moment
Kakashi: so you are gonna ignore all of them too...
Gai(with lowered head,schocked while shaking from anger): but ?!
Kakashi: so our readiness to sacrifice lives ,is it not enough for you ?!
Gai(ashamed a little, begin to calm down): You are right, I am sorry Kakashi, guys.
Kakashi: Don't worry friend, we will help you to get revenge on them
Chouza, Shibi, Tsume, Hiashi: We assure you, they will pay !
Gai(schocked for moment, then smiles, while stopping crying): ?!, thank you very much for your support.

Green aura around Gai is slowly fading away, as schockwave stop comming from Gai calming down enviroment around Gai.

Gai(with serious look at Juubi): I will make sure they will pay
Kakashi: I promise you will get this revenge
Chouza,Tsume, Shibi, Hiashi: it involves all of us !

Meanwhile Lee has to deal with suffering, and pain from Neji death. As Lee try to break Shikamaru's Shadow mititation jutsu, but it hold him still.

Lee(schoked): ?! *That shikamaru*
Lee(angered): Why ?!, my friend Neji just died !
Shikamaru: you need to calm down !
Lee(turns to look at Neji then back to Shikamaru, as rage is overhelming him): release me..., now !
Shikamaru: I don't let you go alone !
Lee(in rage): third gate of life opened !
Shikamaru(pushed back by schockwave comming from lee)oww... ?!
Lee(in rage): just let me go !
Shikamaru(struglling to stand but shout): No way, you need to calm down !
Lee(in rage): Damn... five gate of ?!

Lee is about to unleash five gate of limit, but is stopped by comming behind him Kiba, Chouji, Shino and Ino. While Sakura along with medical team is shown healing all injured shinobi. Naruto is shown with Neji laying on his shoulder and Hinata crying behind him few meters before Lee.

Lee: ?!
Kiba: easy friend, your are not only one who is hurt !
Lee(in rage): then understand I have to avenge Neji !
Chouji: But you will only get killed !
Lee: I don't care I will avenge Neji
Shino: If you die, we will try to avenge you!
Lee: ?! gah!!! , I can't control this rage, it is overhelming !
Ino: Lee..., I just lost my precious dad, I know how you feel but
Lee: *Ino*...
Ino: so please calm down...
Lee: I can't, I will go...
Tenten: No, you no !
Lee: ?!

Lee is overhelmed by rage, when Tenten comes before him, turns to face him then stretch her both arms blocking Lee way to attack, as she is crying a lot.

TenTen: Enough, Lee !
Lee: Tenten..., but Neji...*make hurt face expression*
TenTen: I know, I am very angry, I can barerly keep my rage/sadness but we can't defeat this monster alone *points at Juubi*
Lee: I know, but I will go nevertheles !
TenTen: I can't loose you too...
Lee: ...
TenTen: If you really have to attack alone, you will have to kill me first...
Lee(shocked): ?!
TenTen: I am worried about you, we will have our revenge I promise but not now !
Lee(slowly calms down as he lower his head): *forgive me Neji* You are right TenTen
Lee(raise his head): but I will avenge you Neji, just wait !

Green aura around Lee fade away as Lee calm down completly. TenTen hugs Neji as Kiba, Ino, Shino and Chouji comes and put their hand on Lee shoulder, then smile.

Meanwhile back with Naruto

Naruto(still being in schock, as he moves his looks to Neji lifeless body laying on his shoulder.): Neji...
Hinata: brother Neji..., brother Neji!!!!!
Obito: you didn't lost anyone close to you, do you ?!
Naruto(restores slowly his conscionous hearing Hinata scream and Obito speak): ?!
Obito: Don't worry, it was only warm up for Juubi, we will see how strong is your resolve after I am done
Naruto(become angry and schocked at Obito words): No..., no... ?! *turns his face to Neji lifeless body laying on his shoulder*
Naruto: *only warm up ?!, you just killed Neji..., you want to kill all my friends... NO, I don't let you* Bastard...you will pay...
Obito(mad face): your girl is next *points with index finger at Hinata*
Naruto(schocked then realize he points at Hinata): ?! *Hinata ?!*
Hinata(blush for moment then become serious): ?!

Naruto notices Juubi one of tail moves in his and Hinata direction, as it aim to pierce Hinata.

Obito: I will show you really despair, juubi kill her !
Madara(amused): hmm... *interesting, to aim at his lover *
Naruto(with lowered head,looks with fear at Neji lifeless body): Damn it !
Naruto(with lowered head,looks back at Obito standing on Juubi): I don't...
Obito(mad): Die !
Naruto(raise his head fast): I don't let you hurt her !
Obito: ?!
Madara: ?!

One of juubi tails comming at Hinata from above, as juubi tail is about to pierce Hinata, suddenly yellow light explode, binding everyone as yellow flash is seen in just second before Juubi tail impale in ground, cracking it.

Obito(widden eyes): impossible ?!
Madara(amused): hmm, this boy is really interesting
Obito(looks at Madara then back at Where Naruto should be): ?!

Juubi's tail impaled in ground create huge cloud of dust, covering huge distance in dust. As dust is slowly fading away all shinobi alliance are shown schocked and look in one direction at awe. Obito notices reaction of Shinobi alliance and as he looks where they are looking at, he notices shinobi sparkling in yellow light as he keep glowing yellow light. Everything around this shinobi is shine by glowing yellow light comming from all direction from this Shinobi body. Obito and Madara narrow their eyes as they recognize Naruto is this glowing shinobi.

Kakashi(amazed): wow
Gai(amazed): what a speed...
Darui(widden eyes): even slightly faster than Raikage !
Bee(smilling): Just yellow flash again, that my nigga !
Kitsuchi(schocked): that guy, so fast...
Shizune: Naruto, you really grown up.

Obito(schocked): *at what they look* ?!
Obito(sad): he is... *narrows his eye*
Madara(emotionless ): that nine tails jinchurki, Naruto...
Obito: ?! *impossible*
Madara(amused): It looks like he is in that mode again...
Obito(looks closer): Damn that really him, but he is not that mode, it is another mode, it seems.
Madara(turns to Obito): How can it be ?!, he is glowing in his chakra cloak as before, but brighter color...
Obito(truns to Madara): Indeed, it is similliar, but before you joined battle fray, I was fighting with him in that mode of his. It is weaker than mode you see, according to my information gathered by my minion and Zetsu he fought with Nine Tails in somehow, and won getting some chakra of Nine Tails, but not cooperation, so almost all battle he fought without Ninetails cooperation, and now he has Nine Tails cooperation, so he can go in bijuu orange glowing mode, and full bijuu mode.
Madara(interested): hmm..., interesting news and you just mentioned Zetsu, where is he ?!
Obito(nervously): I don't know, but is seems what happened to him, because he should inform me about everything, Kabuto Edo Tensei was canceled, and many more.
Madara(turns back at Shinobi Aliiance): I got it, but nine tails jinchurki is really stubborn
Obito(turns back at Shinobi Alliance): Yeah *How could he be so fast in that mode, maybe it mean he wasn't at full power, the war he fought Edo Tensei and my Zetsu clones, so this is why he couldn't use his flash speed*
Obito(gulps): *He is as fast as his father it seems*

As dust completly fall down on ground, disappearing. Naruto is shown in glowing yellow light chakra cloak, while keeping Hinata in one hand and Neji lifeless body in another hand. Naruto gentle place Neji lifeless body on ground then he put Hinata down on ground.

Naruto(looks at Neji lifless body as he place him on ground): *rest in peace Neji...*
Hinata(crying): Naruto..., brother Neji...
Naruto(still looks at Neji lifless body as he is laying on ground): *forgive me Neji, I promise to avenge you !*
Hinata(comes and fall on knees while put her hands on Neji belly): brother Neji !
Naruto(clench his fists): Bastard..., Obito..., You will pay!!!
Naruto: I will Kill you !

Naruto is about to rush as he is stopped by Kakashi, Gai, Darui, Kitsuchi, Chouza, Tsume, Shibi, Hiashi, Shikamaru and all rookies along with Karui, Omoi, Kurotsuchi, Choujiro behind them with every all shinobi standing behind them.

Naruto(turns behind himself): Kakashi- sensei, bushy brows- sensei...
Naruto(Everyone): ?!
Kakashi: Naruto, don't try to do everything alone..
Gai: Yeah, we will get our revenge but with all of us, not just you or me
Darui: We will find their weakness
Kitsuchi: Attacking them together is only option to win
Shikamaru: Let's do the last strategy my father told us !
Kakashi and Gai: Masters will not fail
All Shinobi: yeah, This war
Naruto: We will win !

Everyone form Shinobi Alliance is cheering, with Naruto smilling as Kakashi put his arm on Naruto's left shoulder and Gai put his arm on Naruto right shoulder, then both smirks as every generals and rookies from all villages follows them, while looking at Juubi with Obito and Madara standing on Juubi head. Obito has mad face while Madara is looking with interest.

END

616 - Sacrifice

Friday 21 December 2012

Naruto 615 - A Saddening Death

Obito: Didn't you say that you wouldn't let your friends die....Naruto!
Naruto: I'm... I'm going to ****ing kill you!!!!!!!
Shikamaru: Naruto, calm down. We can't have you going apeshit mode, it will ruin the whole strategy!
Naruto: BUT HE JUST KILLED NEJI!!
Shikamaru:....
Kakashi: Shikamaru is right, Naruto. Stay calm and let's prevent the next casualty.
Naruto: grrrrr...
Hinata: Neji-niisan...

Flash Back - Neji & Hinata in the Hyuuga Manor Before the War

Neji: Hinata-sama, there's something I need to speak with you about regarding the upcoming war...
Hinata: What is it, Neji-san?
Neji: I won't be able to protect you as I've done in the past, we'll both be situated at different locations and I can't disobey the orders...
Hinata: Neji-san, stop. Don't you worry, I'm much stronger than I used to be. *I'll show you, Naruto!*
Neji: That's good. But promise me that if you end up against an opponent that you cannot defeat, that you will run away and live on life and aboveall keep the Hyuuga lineage alive!
Hinata: .... I will never give up. We will win this war. And the Hyuuga's won't fail. We're the Konohas strongest after all!
Neji: *Smirks* Heh... You're right. That reminds me. There's something I must ask of you...
Hinata: It's the eyes, isn't it?
Neji: Yes... Since we are the strongest of Konoha, and wield superb eye techniques that many people wishes to get their hands on, we cannot allow anyone to take it from us, especially since the War may not be over after the masked man has been defeated... The Villages may go back to their original status in which case our eye techniques will be crucial in the saving of Konoha.
Hinata: I understand Nii-san, but if worst comes to worse and one of us ends up a casulty, how will we proceed?
Neji: *Naruto: Because You're a genuis!* ... If I die, I want you to give my eyes to Naruto. I have faith in him, he changed the way I used to be, brought me light to this world, and I believe he will be the savior of it all. He deserves this and if I can contribute to his cause even in death, then that is something I will gladly do.
Hinata: Nii-san.....

Back to Present

Naruto: ARRRRGHHGHHHHH!!!
Hinata: Sakura-san, please come over here. Nejii nii-san had a final request in the event where he would die....
Naruto: ?!
Sakura is shown landing beside Nejiis body
Sakura: What is it, Hinata?
Hinata: His dying wish was that Naruto would inheriate his Eye techniques. He wants to support Naruto and the ninja world even in his death. It's an honorable thing for a Hyuuga to do, give up their eyes for the better cause. Please start right away.
Sakura: *Neji...* I will. Naruto, sit absolutely still while I'm doing this eye transplant.
Naruto: I will.... *Neji, I can't thank you enough. Your death will not have been in vain, I will be your eyes, and I will save this world, you just watch me!!*

Obito: Nostalgic, isn't it, Kakashi? Kind of reminds me of the old days... *As if I'm going to let history repeat itself!*
Obito: Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu *Targets Naruto, Sakura, Hinata and the dead Nejii*
Kakashi: *Naive as ever, Obito...* Suiton: Water Encampment Wall!
The Water wall blocks the Katon jutsu completely, and steam is shown heading towards the sky...
Kakashi: Everyone, protect Naruto! If he can get the Kyuubi's chakra as well as the Byuakugan there's no telling what his power will be, it's a bet we'll have to take!
Everyone: Yes, Captain!
Shikamaru: Hit them with all you've got, use nature combinations if you can!

Sution Users: Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu
Katon Users: Katon: Endan!
Doton Users: Doton: Yomi Numa *Puts the juubi out of balance*
Lightning Users: Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu!
Darui: Fuuton Users, sync up with me, it'll be deadly, yo!
Fuuton Users: Fuuton: Kezegaeshi Darui: Black Lightning: Double Black Panther

Madara: *Annoying pests...* Obito, you know what to do...
Obito: Yeah...

Madara and Obito both control the Juubi to an extent where they manage to get 8 out of 10 tails to block the incoming Jutsu, but the Juubi is still out of balance due to the Doton and is damaged just a small bit..

Kiba: All that and we barely scratched him!
Gai: This is called stalling, shut your piehole and keep attacking, for Neji!


Naruto's Mind

Kurama: Naruto... My chakra is ready, but I have to speak with you first...
Naruto: What is it, Kurama?
Kurama: You just got yourself a new pair of eyes, one of the three most valuable eyes in the history of the world.. There's no telling how my Chakra nor how your own body will react to it, are you sure you're ready to fight?
Naruto: I'll be fine. I won't lose this, we'll work together, all of us, and we'll win this. For Neji. I'll be his eyes until I'm dead myself.
Kurama: *Heh, so noble all of a sudden...* Alright, let's do this Naruto! I'll chunk out the most stable of Chakra I possess.
Naruto: What does that mean???
Kurama: *But still an idiot, meh...* It means since I just gathered all this chakra, it's much more stable than the previous large tank of my Chakra that you used, which means the length of your Kyuubi Mode is now at least five times as long, or for an idiot like you, 25-30 minutes.
Naruto: Teheh, let's win this!

Back to present

Naruto is shown over 4 panels on a whole page.
Panel 1: Sage Mode markings that look kind of crippled are showing on the closed-eyed Naruto
Panel 2: Naruto Stands up
Panel 3: Naruto opens his eyes and reveals Sage Mode / Byakuugan
Naruto: Guys, Kurama is ready! *Let's do this!*
Kurama: *Heh...*
Panel 4: Kyuubi Mode is activated - Sage Mode / Byakuugan 'crippled' markings + Kyuubi Mode + Vertical Kyuubi EyeLine is shown
Everyone: Let's win this shit!






To be continued...

Naruto 615 The Awakening

Hinata - No Neji ( Crying )
Naruto - Yo... Yoo..u...Youuuu.... Youuuuu ..... ****ing Bastards.... I'll... Kill You Both ( Crying)
( Hinata Hugs Naruto She Push His Face Into Her Boobs )
Gai - Neji Noooooooo!!!! Gate Of Shock Opppeeen!!!
Lee and TenTen Are Crying
Gai - Gate Of Death Oppppeeenn!!!!
Kakashi - Gai No
Sakura - Naruto I'm So Sorry ( Crying )
Naruto Hold His Head In Pain Scream Blood Leaking from His Eyes Nose And Mouth
Hinata - Naruto Kun Whats Wrong ( Crying )
Naruto - Aaaaaaaaaaagggghhh
Gai - Midnight Dragon
Obito - Oh No
Madara - What Is That
Obito Grabs And Warps Away
The Midnight Hits the Juubi And Blows Up
Obito World
Madara - You Stupid Fool
Obito - What Save Both Us
Madara - Now We Can't Reconnect To The Juubi
Obito - What ?
Real World
Gai Dies
The Juubi Is Covered In Blood And Screaming
Lee - Gai Sensei !!!
Kakashi - Gai Why
Naruto Holding His Eyes
Obito Warps Back With Madara
Madara - No How Could The Juubi Be So Damaged
Hinata - Naruto Are You Ok
Naruto - Ya I Think So
Sakura - Sage Mode ?
Naruto Opens His Eyes
Obito - What ???
Kakashi - Thats The
Hinata - The Rinnegan
Naruto's Mind
Kurama - Grandpa Rikudo Sennin
Rikudo - Kurama Good To See You
Naruto - The Sage
Rikudo - Yes Naruto
Naruto - How Do You Know My Name
Kurama - Yes How Do You Know
Rikudo - Because We Are One In The Same
Naruto / Kurama ???
Rikudo - Your Next In Line To Becauce Sage Of Six Paths
Rikudo - This Is The Staff Of The Power
Naruto - Ok
Rikudo - I'll Help You Sealing The Juubi Into Your Body
Kurama - Are You Sure Grandpa Rikudo
Rikudo - Yes
Real World
Naruto Has Cloak And Staff Of The Sage Of Six Paths
Naruto - Know What Do

Thursday 20 December 2012

Naruto Chapter 615: "Eternal Youth...!"

*Naruto lays Neji carefully onto the ground with Hinata staring in intense saddness*

Obito: "This is war...and war is-"

*Naruto's tears fall profoundly on the spot where Neji's curse mark use to be*

Naruto: "Shut the Hell up!!

*Obito smirks in amusement*

Naruto: "I don't care how you got the way you did, but it doesn't justify anything! A life of someone you care about means more than you can ever know!!"

*Obito stares at Naruto intently*

Obito: *in his thoughts* "I do know....Naruto....that is why...

*Naruto turns in anger as he forms a normal rasengan, leaves begin to dance in the air*
*Obito stops his thought*

Naruto: "A rogue leaf shinobi like you makes me sick!! I was tought something long ago, and you fit the PERFECT description!....Those who abandon their friends....*Naruto's eyes go back into sage mode*....are worse than scum!"
Kakashi:"...."

*Obito looks down. He thinks back to kakashi and Rin long ago"

Obito: "A brat like you refuses to listen! I will rebuild this world...I Will Bring Back What Truly Matters! This world....I don't care anymore....I would be scum if I don't save everyone from this world and all of it's pains!"

*Naruto jumps in the air towards the Juubi, aiming at Obito with the Rasengan*

Naruto: "Enough of that Bull crap! That justifies nothing!"
Obito: "...!"
Kakashi: "...."

*Naruto swings his arms forward along with the rasengan. Obito lets it slip passed him*
*Obito smirks with his eyes closed*

Obito: "You just don't learn do you."

*Suddenly Obito is taken aback as he is punched by Gai who is in the 5th gate*

Obito: "!?!"
Gai: "Like you said, this is war! You should be paying more attention!!"

*Obito lands on the juubi, and realizes that he was careless after Naruto slipped through him. He went back
out of Kamui after thinking there was no other threat*
*Naruto stands in awe on part of the Juubi near Obito. Obito sits up, and looks at Madara with annoyance*

Madara: "I would of said something, but like you said...we aren't friends."

*Gai flashes in insane speed in front of Madara*
*Madara easily avoids it as if nothing*

Gai: *in his head* "He's quick"

*Gai turns to Obito as he prepares to open Gate 6 and 7*

Gai: *in his head again* "Neji died by there hands. Who would of thought that one from my generation would become a threat to the ninja world."

Gai: "Obito...it is sad to see how far you have fallen."

Naruto: "...."
Madara: *with a blank face*
Obito: "It's been a long time...Might Gai"

*The ten-tails swerves around, making Naruto fall on his butt, still staring at Gai and Obito in a faceoff atop the juubi*
*Gai opens the 6th gate, but then immediately opens the seventh. This almost takes Madara off balance as strong
winds boom and spread in every direction.*

Naruto: *remembering Lee opening the fifth gate* "It seems to be a lot stronger this time around. Gai is
amazingly powerful" *His blond hair gets caught in the wind, almost taking his headband*
Madara: *unamused* "Obito, are you sure you can take him on your own?"

*Gai exploding with a strong aura. Fist clenched*

Obito: "Gladly. After all, I have a score to settle with him after being defeated in the Chuunin Exams long ago."

*Gai releasing another massive load of whirlwinds, and glowing in a shining brilliance*

Kakashi: *from below* "That's!?!?!"
Gai: *In thought* "I'm sorry kakashi...I promised you i wouldn't use it...but..."

*Shows Neji on the floor, surrounded by TenTen and Lee with tears in there faces*
*Lee stares up towards his sensei, and flinches in horror*

Gai: "I WON'T LET ANYMORE PRECIOUS PEOPLE DIE IN FRONT OF ME AGAIN!!....ETERNAL YOUTH, IT IS TIME!!!"

Kakashi: *horror on his face* "NO GAI!! DON'T DO IT!!!"

*silence fills the air*

Naruto: "!?"
Rock Lee: "!?"
Madara and Obito: "..."

*Gai turns blood red*

Gai: "THE EIGHTH AND FINAL GATE!! GATE OF DEATH.....OPEN!!!!!!!"

Naruto 615: A time for mourning!

Naruto is cluching onto Neji, tears are streaming down his cheeks as Hinata silently trembles. The seal on his forehead has dissappeared. Neji is dead.

Hinata: Nii-san!

Naruto: Neji? Neji!

Tenten: (Hands are over her mouth in awe)

Rock Lee: My rival, no!

Gai: Bastard! (Looks at Obito) I beat your ass once, you can be damn sure i'll do it again! (Enters Gates)

Kakashi: Enough! He wants you to react like this, so he can pick you off in your haze of anger. Plus, he's too powerful with the Juubi and Madara. There will be a time to avenge your fallen student, I promise.

Gai: ... He will get want he wants, but not before I wrinkle the other side of his face! EIGHTH GATE OPEN!!!

Kakashi: That will kill you fool! Don't do it!

Chakra explodes from Gai's body, the ground cracks apart and other Shinobi around him are blown away. His skin turns red, cracks begin to ripple trough his body. His hair turns snow white while his pupils full dissappear.

Madara: Amazing.

Obito: Be careful, you can't absorb that energy, even with the Rinnegan. And he's quick, we'll have to put the Juubi on stand-by while he leads his attacks.

Madara: Hmph. The Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan can read movements on an even better base than the previous one can. Hyper-sonic movements are of no use.

???: That's good because i'm light speed.

Madara/ Obito: !

The panel shows Gai, directly behind Madara, an ominous look on his face.

Madara: Shit!

Obito: Kamu --- !

[It's too late, twin blows knock them both back, disconnecting them from the Juubi and lodging them inside the ground.

Shikamaru: (In his mind) That's it!

Naruto: Hold Neji, Hinata! (Charges forward)

What tha'! (His movement is frozen. He's under the Shadow Possession.)

Shikamaru: Naruto, don't! Your the key to this war. Trust me, there's a time for mourning! Let Gai hold them off! Ino connect me with all the others!

Ino: Yes (Handsign --- blood leaks out of her nose)

Shikamaru: There's been a slight change in our strategy due to the situation changing. Sakura, Chouji, Chouza, Kiba, and Hinata; distract the Juubi. Shino, Kakashi, Tenten, Ino, and I will battle Obito. Lee, back-up Gai as Madara is weak against Taijutsu. Samui and Darui, protect Bee while the others guard Naruto until he has enough chakra.

Everyone: Yes! (They begin charging to their respective position)

Madara: (Standing) Obito, the others are coming. Listen to me. Kill that Kakashi and take his Sharingan. That way, he can't counter your Kamui. Also, implant it ... and you will unlock the Eternal Sharingan!

Obito: What?! Are you sure?

Madara: Positive.

Obito: (Smilin --- in his head) That would help me with my plan.

Madara: Here he comes.

Juubi: ROOOOAAAARRR!!!! (Prepares a Bijuu- Dama)

[Guy is approaching quickly]

Obito: Not good.

Madara: (Thrust his arm upward and a wooden stick shoots out of his palm into the Juubi)

[The Juubi launches it's Bijuu-Dama in the distance.]

Madara: Good. Be more aware Obi --- !

A fist crashes into the side of his face, sending him flying to the area that the bomb is about to hit. An explosion is seen, Madara is caught in it.

Gai: Your turn.

naruto 615 prediction reason to not give up

Naruto: neji...

hinata: neji ni san! *cries*

hianata father:... neji

flash back

neji: i understand what my father died for going into this war i am prepraed to do the same!

present

tears flow down his eyes aswell

obito: what now i killed your comrades can you see the harsh reality this is dispear! it will be your teacher as i kill each one of yoru comrades one at a time! can you really keep your promise? how many deaths will it take until you become trash!

naruto:...

flash back...

sauske protecting naruto panel

hinata protecting naruto panel

neji protecting naruto panel

naruto: because I WAS CALLED A FAILURE!

neji: because i was called a genius

hinata: ebcasue i love you...


nagato is seen

nagato: war inflicts death injury and pain to both sides, death eternal hatred and pain that does not heal that is what you will face in the coming days naruto, even then i have hope for you... naruto i believe you of all people can...

present..

naruto: neji...NEJI!

naruto tries to enter bijuu mode but exists right away kurama has not gathered enough chakra yet.

hinata: naruto...

naruto: how dare you, *tears flowing from eyes* i swore to save them but they're saving me.

kakashi: naruto get up and fight! this is war!

flash back of nagato is seen again.

naruto: nagto was right...

obito: nagato was a pawn in my plan i made him into what you fought can you truely change people? or was he just a gullible fool!

naruto: I will win this war, nagato gave his life to revive those in the leaf because he believed i could bring peace, i can't go back on my promise to my brother in training! I told him i would never change and i won't I WILL WIN THIS WAR AND I WON'T BECOME TRASH LIKE YOU!

naruto creates shadow clones with the hyuuga infront of him naruto runs forward the juubi releases more spikes hinata uses air palm to knock them away naruto jumps ontop of one of teh flying spikes rasen shuriken in hand entering sage mdoe once mroe he throiws it at obito madara absorbs the jutsu and pulls anruto in with banso tenin obito grabs narutos neck.

obito: give up, from the second the juubi was summoned your fate was choosen!

naruto: he

obito: why the laugh i'm about to destroy you along with all your friends those who live tehir fate is in my genjutsu world!

naruto see's neji infront of him

naruto: stop babbling nonsense, I can change my fate i did so against neji once. and he changed his thats why he gave his life for me and thats why i'll stop you, fate is what you make it pout to be!


obito: why do you presist on going on! why won't you become trash after i killed on of your friends!

naruto: because They believe in me and i would rather be trash like my sensei atleast he doesn't abond his comrades! you are the real trash.

naruto breaks free and tries to hit obito but he phases right though naruto tires to punch him again but obito blocks it punching naruto with his other hand.

madara: obito is right kyuubi child give up and sumit.

naruto: I'll never give up eietehr

obito: what are you.

naruto: i am uzumaki naruto! i won't abond my comrades nor will i give up! You're the ones who should give me on your plan i'll bring peace to this world for real.

obito: SHUT UP AND DIE TRASH! SHIRNE TENSEI!

naruto is knocked down from the top of the juubis head hianata cacths him and looks up at the juubi.

hinata: naruto for nejis sake w for the entire worlds you must win. i believe in you.

kakashi: i believe in you.

sakura: i believe in you.

choji: i believe in you.

shikamaru: i believe in you.

the whole ninja allince says this to naruto obito looks on with a strange face and widened eyes.


obito: why why do they all...

kakashi: its because he never gave up wanting to be acknowledged he's gained the respect from everyone here, he wanted it and he never gave up even in the toughest situations. Just like you were obito!

naruto: now you see why i can't lose! why i can't become trash!

obito: it doesn't matter, what if i kill every single one of them then will you sumit who will be left to believe in you
.

naruto: as long as i've got people you can believe in me i won't lose!

jiraya and minato image are seen standing next to naruto ( image ghost like)

obito: !!! will then let this be your final test the juubi's completion is at hand.

final page shows juubi transforming once more

Wednesday 19 December 2012

Naruto 615 Prediction: A New Resolve

Naruto is still holding Neji’s body, he gently places him down and turns to Hinata.

“okay, That will be enough, I don’t need protecting anymore.”

Hinata looks at Neji then Naruto, “but , but(she stands up with confidence) it is no longer you I protect anymore! It’s you and brother Neji, so I will protect you because I love you Naruto, not because of this war, but also because you now have Neji’s life. He gave it to you.”

Naruto looks at her and nod his head in agreement, “then come on we’re doing this together!”

Obito looking down, {does anything break his resolve?} “so be it.”

Madara, “is your plan not going well?”

Obito just looks at him and then back at the Alliance.

Kakashi sees Neji laying life less near Naruto and Hinata, {damn, Neji. Hinata how has this affected you?} “everyone steady yourself, he isn’t done!”

One of the Juubi hands is coming down towards Kakashi and the others.

Everyone is looking but there is no time to evade it.

SLAMMM!!!!

Kakashi is looking up he sees, “Choji and Chouji!”

They are both huge but only big enough to stop this one hand.

Shikamaru, “dammit..” {the Kyuubi isn’t back yet, this plan rides on him.}

Naruto, “hey Obito, Yes. Yes I did say that about my comrades before.”

Obito looks.

Naruto, “the thing is, I was being childish. This is war and people get hurt, friends and loved ones may die. But we must fight on and honor their sacrifice, without sacrifice there is no life.”
Obito, “I am going to fix that soon as I defeat this pointless Alliance.”

Naruto, “you know until I met you I thought I was kinda dumb. You so dumb you don’t see what’s in front of you The Alliance is your dream…and MiNE!”

Obito is a bit thrown off, “what? But look around people are dying, this isn’t my dream!”

Madara, {hmmm, who’s resolve is faltering now?}

Naruto, “yeah they are but that is your doing. Everyone came together because of you. But also they are dying and getting hurt because of you.”

Shikamaru, {is he buying us time or is he really trying to stop this guy with words?}

Obito, “but, I I am going to make a world where no one dies! No one is sad!”

Madara, {okay, I am going to step in now.} “this is how you break a hero’s resolve.”

He break’s loose from the Juubi and claps his hands together, “Wood style: rising death!”

Obito, “what… are ?”

Many wood spikes rise form the ground on the battlefield, they begin to go through the Alliance swiftly taking out 4 and 5 at a time.

Hinata is pulled out of the way by Naruto he holds her up as spike rise and go through his leg and side.

Naruto sees this, then talking to Hinata, “I finally see everything, including you. Sorry it took so long” He slightly smiles.

He looks up his eyes are Sage mode

A hand comes crashing down on them and the debris is scattered.

Hyuuga member, “Hinata-Sama?!”

Sakura, “Naruto!”

Shikamaru, “dammit, come on you idiot!”

Naruto’s voice from the dust that is clearing, “hey, Is that anyway to talk to the future Hokage?”

He is holding the hand up with one, with the help of a clone and Hinata in his other arm.
Shikamaru, “when your Hokage I will call you Konoha’s Idiot Hokage. Now quit fooling around, we are depending on you!”

Obito, “indeed no more fooling around, Madara…”

Madara, “Yes I know I think I will destroy everyone now, you just go as far as you can, don’t worry about the Juubi it will be fine.”

Naruto is smiling as he throws the hand off and jumps off the spikes with Hinata.
Sakura rushes over and begin to heal his injuries.

Obito, “why are you smiling?”

Madara, “it doesn’t matter, get out of here Obito.”

Naruto, “Kage Alliance no jutsu.”

Suddenly as he sys that Raikage with Oonki on his back slams into Madara sending him flying off the Juubi. A great amount of sand attacks the eye of the Juubi. Lava begins to surround Madara as he goes into his Susan’oo.

Tsunade is behind Naruto, Sakura and Hinata.

She sees Hinata holding Naruto’s arm, “well it’s about time.”

Naruto scratches his head and blushes, “uhm, Sakura?”

Sakura, “it’s fine Naruto, trust me.”

Madara, “how, did…?”

Raikage come crashing down on the Susan’oo, “we made a promise to that guy over there!”

Mei, walks up, “wouldn’t be good for a Kage to break a promise, you understand right?”

Oonki, “now, where were we?”

Gaara comes in, “we are about to defeat, the great Madara Uchiha. Once and for all!”

Naruto, “I’m okay now, I felt you goes coming a few moments ago when I was in Sage mode before!”

Obito, {dammit, I can barely keep the Juubi still without Madara here, I have to do something}
Shikamaru, “Naruto is he ready yet?”

Kurama inside Naruto, “I have chakra but if we are gonna be sure I need more.”

Naruto, “Not yet Shikamaru, but I got a plan, don’t worry!”

Kakashi, “lady Tsunade you keep scaring me like this. Glad your okay.”

Tsunade, “hmmm, oh you mean being Hokage after I die. Don’t need to worry bout that, after the war your Hokage anyway! I’m getting too old for this!”

Naruto, {Kakashi sensei, Hokage? Hmmmm, well he deserves it, but watch out cause I’m about to blow there minds!} “hey Kakashi Sensei, you mind if I beat up your ex-teammate?”

Obito, “what? As if you..”

Naruto from behind him, “rasengan!”

He rams it into his back causing Obito to fall. The Juubi reacts wildly but calms down .

Obito, “how did you…?’

We see Naruto eyes in Sage mode, “a jutsu my Father created but never finished, he had a habit of that.”

Obito, “what…the fourth Hokage? I don‘t mean the rasengan”

Naruto, “me either…”

Kakashi, {did he just use but he doesn‘t know the first levels of it, how could he use…} “Flying Thunder God: version 3!?”


Next: “Heritage”

Naruto 615 Prediction: Neiji's dying wish

Inside Naruto*
Naruto " Kurama, can't you give him some chakra to spare his life"
Kurama "Sorry Naruto, he's to close to death, and his wound is to big, but I can give him some to pro long his life a little"
*Scene changes to a hidden forest*
Neiji "Am i dead, what is this feeling I have, who are those people ahead*
*Neiji scampers forward and see's his father, white fang, and Jman in front of a fire*
*Neiji's dad looks over at Neiji*
Neiji's Dad "Son, come join us and tell us about your life, I'm sorry to be seeing you again this early"
*Neiji walks over and joins them*
*Before Neiji can speak, a white light breaks through and he begins to levitate*
Neiji's dad "It seems you still have some time left son, make it worth your while, see you soon"
*Scene changes back to the battlefield*
*Neiji wakes up and looks at Naruto*
Neiji "I'll make this quick, seeing i don't have much time left, please call over Hinata and Sakura Haruna"
*Naruto calls Sakura over, and Hinata walks to Neiji*
Neiji "Listen, before i go, I have one last request
Neiji "Naruto, you've shown me a new light on life, i want to pass my lineage to you as a gift"
Hinata "Neiji you"
Neiji "It's ok Nii-san, with you hear i know Naruto and you will be a good team together, please teach him the techniques of the byakugun"
Sakura "I see, you want me to perform medical ninjitsu and transfer your eyes to him"
*Naruto looks scared, but Kurama re-assures him it's okay*
Sakura "I'll start right away"
Neiji "Wait, Naruto and Hinata i have one last request from you"
*Neiji points to INO*
Neiji "That woman, is carrying my future child, she is only 3 months and we haven't told anyone yet. Please watch over my son, and protect him"
Naruto "Sure thing"
*Hinata blushes*
*Sakura is floored*
Neiji "Now you can give him my eyes"
Sakura "Come here Naruto" *as she takes out her scapel*
*Naruto comes closer, Sakura is performing the procedure*
*Tobi and Madara look on*
Tobi "Looks like he wants to keep his pathetic clan going, how futile of him"
Madara "Hmphhh, nothing they do will make this different, i'll put an end to this now"
*Madara raises his hand and natural lightning begins to form around it*
*RAITON!!!, SHIKU NINSHUHEKI* (Lightning thunder shot)
*Madara showers the alliance with lightning strikes and a big cloud forms*
Madara "There, that should take care of the worms"
*The smoke clears and the alliance is unharmed as they're covered inside a ball made from natural energy*
Tobi "!"
Madara "Impossible, that technique is unstoppable what's the meaning of this*
*more smoke clears and it shows naruto in his new Sage Byakugun mode*
*Naruto, has blue chakra emitting from his pores, and his eyes are a combination of the byakugun, sage mode, and KCM mode*
*Neiji is lying motionless on the ground dead*
Naruto "You killed my comrade, you must pay with your life"
*Naruto dissapears, and strikes Obito before he could blink, causing his human arm to fall off*
Obito "You bastard, this arm won't reform"
Madara "I see, you got a little stronger, but you can't beat me i'm immortal"
Naruto "We'll see, with this technique, i'll blow you to dust again and again until you don't have enough chakra to regenerate"
*Naruto clasps his hands toward Madara,and a giant energy ball encompasses both Madara, and the Juubi*
Naruto "Sage Arts, Super Big Ball, RASENGEN"!!!!!!
*Chapter ends with Madara being swallowed by the technique